ornery's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ship Spin]

hmmm

looks more just plain futuristic than cyberpunk really. Would be a better fit in just a typical space level.

Kinsei responds:

ok, goosing it up wouldn't be to hard,
I\ll get right on it.

[dash the hedgehog]

Mother fucking brilliant

This made my night, im serious, I hadnt smiled all day, and then I stumbled on this jewel. Kudos.

[FiddehSeven]

Excellent

Just wish there was a bit more than the plain white background. In this piece it doesn't add anything, only makes it look unfinished. Also just crop it where the legs end, or extend them to the bottom, because again it looks unfinished.

Excellent work on the musculature of the back though.

de-cider responds:

Fixed!

Thanks for the review, Ornery :)

[Dance]

Needs less

this is a great strong piece, but i think you would benefit with even less line work for the figure. One of the strengths of this piece is that you are showing so much with so little, and yet at its current state their is still to much. Remove a few of the blue lines and it will still read as a figure, but now the viewer will be more engaged and fill in the gaps unconciously in their minds, which makes the piece so much more powerful and elegant.

An example of this is the figures right arm, its done with just enough line and weight to not feel over done, and leaves just enough suggestion of what is going on to read perfectly.

[Hmm. Which one is fake?]

Not that tricky

Considering that the fabricated toy is the ONLY one casting a very sharp and obvious shadow, the illusion is lost. Instead try to match its properties to those of the real pieces. See how the real ones have shiny spots, and more color variations, and very little shadow, add those elements to your 3d image and you might get a more convincing piece.

[Heavy Metal Alice]

Great Creepy lookin chick there

I like the overall feel of this piece. But one thing is biting at my curiosity. What would happen if i scanned that bar code?

Dasneviano responds:

Hmm.... good idea, I have no clue, I just picked it up from the internet I guess, so it's very likely it contains porn

[bored in classes]

You must look bonkers in public.

Awesome designs. Wish the pic was a bit bigger so we could get a good idea of the details though.

[Unfilled, Unfulfilled]

Well done for a glass study

Kick your contrast up more, gets some pure whites in there and really push the blacks and it will look much more like glass.

Etheria responds:

yeahh I need to overcome my fear of going darker with shading, haha~

[statement]

Small and bad

Why so small. Why so bad. Why so cliché.

[down]

Love the distance in this

Great depth. Wish i could see it all at once and it was like 7 feet tall or something.