ornery's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Landing!]

Nothing special

The animation was good enough to not warrant any complaints, but it was nothing spectacular. The drawings themselves were mediocre but got the point across. Sound was clean but dry and repetative. Just an average flash submission.

[Blergh]

Oh my god I love this

It looked like it was going to be your run of the mill generic flash, but boy did it suprise. I didnt see any of that coming.

aap responds:

Haha, great! :)

[He Stole My Teddy]

The way flash movies should be

Really brings me back to the good ol days of NG, when politically incorrect was the way to go. I miss those days and wish more flash movies were like that while maintaining the quality shown in this one.

Meebs responds:

Thanks, you understand why this is edgy.
People need to stop acting so lame.

[Mondialvallee Trailer]

Decent Trailer

Gives a good sense of what the game is going to be like. I was also pretty impressed with the little movie you had running in the upper left corner.

[Don't let it happend to u]

Let Down

Judging by your intro and text effects I was hoping for something a little better than what you gave us. A cheaply animated stick figure wasnt what i was hoping for. You did have an intresting 3D effect thrown in with it, but it wasnt good enough to to excuse the crappy stick.

[Hiv and Aids]

Some things good, some things bad.

The animation and sound fit nicely. I particularly like how you showed the infections by coloring red or white, very effective. But your facts need some looking into, especially if this is for school. Gays have equal rate of HIV to that of straights. Its spelt "Africa" (no k). The prostitutes fact was unnesscary and probably just a guess anyway. When you showed Africa, you highlighted a few countries, yet one of them wasnt South Africa (which has the highest HIV rate in the world).

Kk-dis responds:

Sorry about the Afrika thing, i just translated it from Danish lately, and i completely forgotten about changing "Afrika", which is spelled with a "k" in Danish..
Thanks

[I hate math so very much]

Choppy

The animation was choppy, the drawings were poor, and the sound synchronization was off. But on the subject of the sound, the voice acting was pretty good, infact its the only redeeming thing this flash had. The other sounds were grainy and choppy as well. The story wasnt terrible, but it wasnt helped by the choppyness of the animation at all.

[Ki Factor]

Well drawn

You can definetly draw so maybe do more original work instead of just doing renditions of over used characters. Your stuff will have much more potential if you stray from the familar characters and start using original ones instead.

[BIG -N- bad]

A horrible slideshow

I doubt you were going for a slideshow, but thats essentially what this is. About 4 pics set to music with some unfunny text. Not much else.

[Goats]

Hypnotizing, but not in a good way

It was sort of hypnotic watching the goats move about the screen like that and the wierd noises heightened that feeling, but it was a pretty crappy flash nonetheless. An improvement would have been to add more than just 3 pictures.